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Peter Johnson's avatar

Tom: I never once thought of him as an influence, and yet he was my main man from 1969-72, a kind of antidote to Rod McKuen. This is precisely why it's so hard to talk about "influence." Who knows what is percolating in one's head.

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Thomas Molitor's avatar

In 1969 my ratted-haired older sister use to lounge around her room chain-smoking Tareyton cigarettes drinking Olympia beer and listening to Rod McKuen records. The only thing worse than reading Rod McKuen is listening to Rod McKuen reading his poems.

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Peter Johnson's avatar

Wow, that's like being strapped onto a cot and have someone inflict a drop of water on your forehead every twn seconds.

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Thomas Molitor's avatar

Peter, curious to know if you've ever read Trout Fishing in America? Brautigan's deliberate irrationality, surreal imagery, and off-the-wall similes reminds me of many of your poems.

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Robert Perchan's avatar

I do wonder how many of us "comic" prose poets were first inspired by The Rocky and Bullwinkle Show and Mad Magazine. I know I have written my share of Fractured Fairy Tale poems--prose and verse.

Thanks,

Sherman

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Sydney Lea's avatar

That commentary is fascinating! Thanks.

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Peter Johnson's avatar

Thanks, Syd. Have a good Thanksgiving. Been reading Donald Hall's octogenarian essays.

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Thomas Molitor's avatar

"But how to the find the right way to express my high/low sensibility?"

I am reminded of the self-immolation poetry of Charles Bukowski who

brought the fire out of the academy and into the streets where there

were few classical allusions. "I'd rather hear about a live American

bum than a dead Greek god," as he put it.

Can't we all agree that M.F.A. stands for "Master of Fine Affectations"?

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Peter Johnson's avatar

Bukowksi often takes a beating from Academics, especially, understandably, women, but when he was good, he very good. What many of his detractors overlook is that he usually was also tough on himself, which made it easier to controversial.

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Thomas Molitor's avatar

I could argue that Bukowski was a feminist but

deeply doubt anyone would listen. Thanks for

the József intro. Yet another writer waiting

on the tarmac to read. Have a great Thanksgiving

holiday. By the way, did you ever write a poem

about Thanksgiving?

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Peter Johnson's avatar

No,. but I don't see how Buk could be a feminist. I like much of his work but he was an unapologetic caricature most of the time. It's hard to explain but when he was immersed in the poem itself, the poem could be very good, but the old "I'm a tough guy who likes to drink and fight and fuck (usually together) and that makes me cool" thing took over, I got bored very quickly.

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Thomas Molitor's avatar

I think you're suggesting that his bard of the bars persona, a persona

that first got him recognition in the undergrounds ( Open City;

his column work: Notes of a Dirty Old Man ), would hijack a perfectly

non-persona poem and divert it back to the persona. Could be. I'd have

to read his later work with that thought in mind. Cheers!

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Sydney Lea's avatar

No.

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