I wonder if everyone would feel better if they thought God was a woman. I know I do. And God is good! Yes, she is! (The "s" is lower case intentionally.)
HI Peter, I enjoyed each of the three poems. I like this line quite a bit: "Yet I still believe in the deep footprints of God, know I’ll stumble into them, that He’ll part a cloud with a calloused right hand, look down on me and say, " Thinking of God having, not just footprints, but deep ones was evocative.
Would God say, "soldier on"? Isn't that more what a commander in an army might say, but God, who is Love, would say something different, maybe "Mother on" or something more Led Zeppelin
Good point, Jeff. To be honest, those choices are more intuitive than rational for me in poetry, though looking back at it now, I think I wanted to mix, as I usual do, the high and the ;low. That, is the colloquial "Soldier on!" which also carries with it the iconic image of God instructing the archangel Michael and his crew. But I do like the Zeppelin idea.
Great stuff, as ever, Peter. Though raised in the Episcopal Church ("not a Presby, not a Lutheran, not a Baptist white with foam, I am an Anglican, one step from Rome"), my Pennsylvania-German progenitors evidently finding the English Church a surer path to upward mobility than their own folks' Anabaptism, I nonetheless have struggled very similarly for a long, long time. You feel like a soulmate.
I agree, Syd. I wish you lived closer, or maybe we can go on a final "Metamucil Poetry Tour" hitting all the assisted living places from Ogunquit to Santa Cruz. But I have tentatively committed to do one last reading at Bookstock in Vermont next year. It would be fun to meet up then.
I wonder if everyone would feel better if they thought God was a woman. I know I do. And God is good! Yes, she is! (The "s" is lower case intentionally.)
Great! I'll be reading at Bookstock too!
SL
HI Peter, I enjoyed each of the three poems. I like this line quite a bit: "Yet I still believe in the deep footprints of God, know I’ll stumble into them, that He’ll part a cloud with a calloused right hand, look down on me and say, " Thinking of God having, not just footprints, but deep ones was evocative.
Would God say, "soldier on"? Isn't that more what a commander in an army might say, but God, who is Love, would say something different, maybe "Mother on" or something more Led Zeppelin
Good point, Jeff. To be honest, those choices are more intuitive than rational for me in poetry, though looking back at it now, I think I wanted to mix, as I usual do, the high and the ;low. That, is the colloquial "Soldier on!" which also carries with it the iconic image of God instructing the archangel Michael and his crew. But I do like the Zeppelin idea.
Great stuff, as ever, Peter. Though raised in the Episcopal Church ("not a Presby, not a Lutheran, not a Baptist white with foam, I am an Anglican, one step from Rome"), my Pennsylvania-German progenitors evidently finding the English Church a surer path to upward mobility than their own folks' Anabaptism, I nonetheless have struggled very similarly for a long, long time. You feel like a soulmate.
I agree, Syd. I wish you lived closer, or maybe we can go on a final "Metamucil Poetry Tour" hitting all the assisted living places from Ogunquit to Santa Cruz. But I have tentatively committed to do one last reading at Bookstock in Vermont next year. It would be fun to meet up then.